King Midas : “It all started when Bacchus, the god of happiness offered to grant me 1 wish, silly as I was, I asked Bacchus to make everything that I touched turn to gold. I thought that would make me a happy man, I always knew deep down inside that I was never really happy, but I tried to force myself to think that someday when u grow up you will thank me, for giving you all the gold you can possibly have in the world…. I was so caught up with greed that I lost myself in my own selfish act. I tried to eat, but when I touched the food it turned to gold, I couldn’t even hug you without you turning to gold, I had lost the only thing I truly cared about, and that was you…. my daughter. I cried and cried after that and I thought I would never get you back. To my surprise, Bacchus the god of happiness, showed up again, at first I didn’t think about it much then, only until he asked me which two things do I think is worth the most, the gift of the golden touch, or you my only daughter… I realized at that point that my obsession with gold has robbed me of my only daughter, of course I said you. And with that Bacchus told me how I could get you back by getting water from the fountain and pouring it on everything that I touched that turned to gold.. As soon as you changed back I couldn’t dare think of telling you how selfish I had been, but now I realize it’s probably one of the best things I could ever do.” Midas proud of himself for telling his daughter, let out a big smile.
Iris: “ wow father, im actually not surprised and im defiantly not mad, you learned your lesson and that’s all that matters, im just glad your back to your old self, now lets finish making dinner im starving!” she said with bright eyes looking at her father, pleased that he told her the truth.
its part of a dialouge that im suppose to do before i was questioning if it was of dialouge format.. but alot of u said yes so im curious to know if my dialouge is flowing.. and if it sounds natural?? any suggestions would be great!
NOTE: it still is like not even half of my dialouge its near the ending of it.. well it is lol.. its waaay to long to put my whole dialouge on here but this is just a taste of what its about.. King Midas and the golden touch.
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